Additional Info Essay: Extenuating Circumstances Help

roarx1
Mon, 30 Mar 2015 14:34:03 +0000

Hi, my father passed away in the middle of my freshmen year of college and it impacted me greatly socially and academically. I was wondering how I could address this in the additional section. I presented a more factual and serious essay and is ~400 words. Should I shorten it or present it in a more different way?