Admissions essay about bus driver?

jane12345
Sat, 19 Mar 2011 11:13:36 +0000

Hi guys,

I, like most others, would like to write a very creative and unique college admissions essay.

I would like to write about my bus driver, who, at first, seemed a little sketchy to me. As I continued to ride the bus, I came to realize he is the kindest man I know. He recently was fired for being compassionate and giving everyone rides who needed them in lieu of following the bus company’s strict policies–in short, he got fired for being nice. He was fired because he cared more about the students’ well being and happiness than the rules. He has inspired me to be kind to others; he showed that little things count and can change one’s day completely.

Does this sound unique to you guys? Or is it not a good idea at all?

Thank you!