Amherst Supplement Suggestions

ShesOnHerWay
Mon, 01 Nov 2010 01:37:19 +0000

Maybe you should pick a prompt that tells the adcoms something they don’t know about you yet. That you are a golf recruit and an athlete is something they already know. Your example is one that would be expected from you. While it is well written and I especially like the quote about room for improvement, it doesn’t really tell an adcom something they wouldn’t be able to tell from your application. These essays are opportunities for you to tell adcoms something about you that you haven’t already shown in your application.