an introduction for capital punishment

mehdii1
Tue, 23 Jul 2013 15:10:44 +0000

thank you so much halcyonheather.i learned a lot.

I know my first sentence isnot original but I asked if you find it ambiguous and misleading or not.because my teacher said something like that.i explained in my previous post that when I showed my paper to her,she thought that my first sentence was misleading and not clear enough and I had to explain more to clarify it but I believe this sentence and its figurative meaning is clear and my subsequent sentences will clarify everything.what do you think?and I have another question.what do you think about structure of my essay?
did it flow nicely or you found my introduction a mess?did I succeed to get you motivated and curious to read what I m going to write after my introduction?please reply to all of my questions carefully because I need your knowledge to improve my essay writing skills.thanks.