an introduction for capital punishment

mehdii1
Tue, 23 Jul 2013 15:24:30 +0000

my teacher taught me to write an introduction following this structure:
first the most general sentence then the writer tries to narrow down the topic down then writer presents his view(thesis statement)and last one is blueprint which is optional.the reason I wrote I believe in my essay was I was trying to present my view and I was trying to follow the structure I just mentioned.what do you think?