an introduction for capital punishment

halcyonheather
Tue, 23 Jul 2013 19:21:13 +0000

Was my sentence wrong?



Not technically. There’s no rule that says you can’t write it that way. I just think the emphasis in the phrase should be on “number,” and that comes through more when it’s at the end. Also, “considerably” modifies “decreased,” so I thought they should be next to each other.