Any chance at ALL? :-(

laurgirl220
Sun, 03 Jun 2007 14:46:08 +0000

I have to write my essay by tomorrow, for my history class (teacher wants to be involved in our college search). I can, of course, and probably will, change my essay when the time comes to submit it in the fall. Basically this was what he told us: Find an adjective that describes you, then write an essay which is a personal essay, that demonstrates the adjective, without explicitly saying “This is how i am caring.”

My teacher gave us an example of his daughter’s essay (she went to Brown). She wrote about how she joined the volleyball team and it was a new experience to her… since people always came up to her as the “brain” now she was an athlete and needed help, as opposed to being the one to give help.

Again, I appreciate ALL of your comments and advice. I appreciate it tremendously. Thank you so much.