any reviewers for a RISKY essay?

User_name_1
Wed, 28 Dec 2005 17:36:13 +0000

Parents i would greatly appreciate it if you would read over my essay. I’m worried that it could be read as unpatriotic. … Its is not a Bush rant i promise, it doesnt even talk about modern politics… its simply different, perhaps overly idealistic and naiive. More importantly if you can’t wade through it tell me so I can try and spice it up. PM me if interested in helping a nervous wreck of a high school senior.