Anyone care to quickly read my Activities Statement please?

shannabanana1129
Sat, 16 Oct 2010 17:05:52 +0000

Update! I tried to make it less generic and more descriptive. Any thoughts are welcome and helpful, and thanks in advance

“My experiences in my high school theater have had a profound impact on me. I was a four time cast member and nine time crew member in my school theater’s productions. I was also an active member of a specialized theater group, the Conflict Resolution Crew, dedicated to mentoring middle school students and promoting acceptance in our school and community through team-building and the production of original plays dedicated to real-life issues. Making a contribution to my community coupled with the skills, confidence, and wonderful friends I have gained, has made theatre the most important activity to me.”

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