Anyone care to quickly read my Activities Statement please?

WiscoKid
Mon, 04 Oct 2010 17:27:55 +0000

I think your essay is pretty broad. Anyone who acted in high school could have wrote those things, to be honest. You wrote about how it affected you, but not how you chose it. Say something about the moment when you realized you wanted to dedicate the majority of your time to acting, and then maybe say a bit about how it affected you or how you’ve dedicated time to it. This is at least what I did, but since I am applying this year as well, I don’t know if it will be successful