Anyone care to quickly read my Activities Statement please?

shannabanana1129
Sun, 03 Oct 2010 18:15:33 +0000

Prompt: In 50-100 words, briefly explain how you decided which activity was the most important to you.

“My involvement in theatre has had an enormous impact on my life. It taught me to come out of my shell and not be afraid to show who I am, in front of a crowd or otherwise. It introduced me to some of the greatest people I have ever known. I gained skills in theatre, such as writing and performing, but more importantly I grew as a person. If it weren’t for the things I learned and the people I met in my theatre program, I would not be the person I am today.”

Any thoughts? I know it’s extremely short, but it’s 94 words which is almost the limit. Thank you so much!