Arrogance in an Essay

Lilliana330
Sat, 22 Feb 2014 08:04:30 +0000

Hmm too much talk about arrogance in one place. You should be focusing on the lessons learned instead. The smallest hint of a bad trait can be easily misconstrued in an essay, and your improvement could quickly fade into the background. I’d say no.

Also, something that’s not clear from your post: By “big change in my life,” are you talking the moving process itself or about an actual change in your character? Are you reflecting only on moving to India or on becoming a different person? Cause if there’s no reference to a change in traits (aka if, according to the essay, you remained arrogant), then this would only hurt your app.