Artistic sample - anyone want to take a look?

mattbg121
Fri, 01 Apr 2011 16:54:58 +0000

I liked it. It looked very good and your cinematography is very good. However, I thought the video was somewhat roughly cut; there were several shots that hung several seconds too long. I know some of this was intentional, but it gave the film a slow, dreary feel, that, while well-suited to the topic of the film, made the film almost uncomfortable to watch. The story was interesting, but im not a fan of the ending. I feel like death or suicide to end a project like this is just melodramatic. There could have been a much cooler, interesting, and creative ending to a project like this I feel.