Calling all 800 SAT II Writing People

mijehar
Thu, 30 Dec 2004 15:12:38 +0000

That’s a very good essay with excellent support. I would give it an 11. However, try to be concrete and specific. For example, avoid using ambigious words and phrases such as “things” and “over the course of history.”

Also, you could try to incorporate some transition words to put at the beginning to your paragraphs like “however,” “for example,” and “likewise.”