Can somebody score my essay?

wrywry
Sat, 06 Dec 2014 04:29:16 +0000

Organization: 4/6 (conclusion, and essay in general, is short)
Diction: 3/6 (simple words, nothing interesting)
Thesis: 3/6
Grammar: 5/6 (didn’t notice anything glaring)
Supporting Details: 2/6 (they’re all personal experience and not that convincing or in depth)

Overall: 3/6 or 6/12