Can Someone Please Rate my SAT Essay?

muneebrocks
Sun, 05 Jan 2014 10:38:03 +0000

4/6
There are several grammar mistakes
The essay seems short
This in particular is badly phrased
a group of students together with me, did a petition that the school should be more educational in studies. Today, the school is one of the top school in the country.
Your introduction was really good however your first example was not good enough please explain next time why Gandhi fighting for women’s right is a good thing.
Don’t get me wrong I don’t mean that women did not deserve equality but the thing is in your essay you never showed
Is it important to question the ideas and decisions of the people in positions of authority?

this answer is extremely lacking please give a better conclusion

If he had not sound out his view, which was “women are also created as equally as men by God”, women in India would still be inferior to men.

Hope this helps