Can Someone Please Rate my SAT Essay?

jkjeremy
Mon, 06 Jan 2014 12:42:12 +0000

Some of your ideas have life but this is a three because it doesn’t show that you have control over language.

Take a look at this:

school’s poor educational system. The educational system. The educational system in a rural school

Also, indefinite pronouns and empty verbs serve only to take up space, and too many of them appear in this paper.

Correct grammar isn’t the most important aspect of the essay but as mentioned above some of your phrasings are awkward to say the least.