can someone take a look at my uc essays? please?

<p>these are the ones i wrote in my english class
so these are really crappy. i just want to know how BAD they are. and how i could improve them. </p>

<p>anyone interested? thanks</p>

<p>ill look :)</p>

<p>Me toooooo :)</p>

<p>i havent gotten it yet...</p>