Can you grade my SAT essay?

Aj1993
Mon, 25 Apr 2011 11:29:32 +0000

I didn’t know much about the second example i was clutching straws. Good catch
and i almost ran out of time. It took me like 6 minutes to brain storm.
I noticed all the punctuation errors after i posted it decided not to change it.
4-5 on 12!!???