Carnegie Mellon Essay

<p>I'm not very good at writing i would enjoy some help</p>

<p>submit a one-page, single-spaced essay that explains why you have chosen Carnegie Mellon and your particular major(s), department(s) or program(s). This essay should include the reasons why you've chosen the major(s), any goals or relevant work plans and any other information you would like us to know. If you are applying to more than one college or program, please mention each college or program you are applying to. Because our admission committees review applicants by college and programs, your essay can impact our final decision. Please do not exceed one page for this essay</p>

<p>I have chosen Carnegie Mellon because it is one of the top Engineering Universities and I believe I have the best chance of becoming successful in the future after graduating. I believe after. Engineers are curious and innovative and since I was a child I have always like to take apart my toys and computers and see how they worked.
I have chosen to major in Elec/Computer engineering because I’m passionate about computers. I would enjoy the chance to learn more about how they work.</p>

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<p>Use this. I'm applied for CMU ED2, so I'd done my essay already and the link helped me lots. Make sure you think about why you want to apply to CMU, and make sure you have checked the requirements for the program you will apply.</p>

<p>thanks that helped alot</p>