chances at carnegie mellon

The_Witzness
Sat, 07 May 2005 16:03:26 +0000

I was wondering if any of you would be able to assess my situation in your opinion

Right now, I am a Junior in a ny suburb public school in long island and according to the colleges i would be considered white haha

GPA: 95 unweighted/ most likely a 98-99 weighted

SAT: 1980 ( basically i bombed it) I am retaking it in June so assume that i will get in the 2100-2250 range when you do this review ( or look at both lol)

SATII’s: 680 U.S History, wont know until may-ish i will be taking the math IIc and bio for the other two( took them today predict math:740 bio:680)

APs: 4 on U.S History. This year I am taking 6 AP’s, next year I will be taking another 3-4

Courseload: The hardest available in my school

Rank: school doesnt rank but im on high honor roll and i assume top 10/class of 420

Prospective Major: Business/Economics

By the end of high school I will most likely have 12 AP’s

Other Factors
-until high school attended a gifted school that only let in 15 kids per grade (2nd to 8th)
-State or Country: New York
-School Type: Public
-Ethnicity: White
-Gender: Male

Extra Curriculars/Awards

-Spanish Honor Society (9-12) 11th: Secretary 12th: President


METMUNC( model united nations)(9,11,12): board member staff position


-National Honor Society(11,12): President( i hear through the grapevine haha)

-Wall Street Investors Club(10-12) President


School Newspaper(11-12): head news writer
DECA ( Marketing Club)(10-12)
Fed Challenge competitive team(2 years){ very exclusively selected}
Student Council (12, School Wide President)
SING participant
Community Service Club (9-12):Most likely a miniscule board spot if any
3 Years of Varsity Spring Track,
1 Year of Junior Varsity Football, 1 year Varsity Football
{ which makes me a four time scholar athlete recipeient}


-Recipient of John Hopkins University Mathematics and Verbal Talent Search State Award for being among the highest scoring participants in the competition,


METMUNC Honorary Mention Award for 2004


-Ketah Torah Recipient at temple for educational excellence

4 years of travel soccer


Work as a spanish tutor, worked as a waiter over a summer at a summer camp, UPenn Pre College Program for this summer


Hook/ Additional Activities


I am currently writing a screenplay
Also I am a songwriter, and am currently working on an album of my own. My music is a mixutre of hip hop and neo soul singing in my opinion
In this, I started up my own record label ( business creation) where i am working on promoting myself through various plans as well as other local artists
My main community service plan is my efforts to found a organization to aid the poverty in colombia


If you read all of this, i heavily appreciate it and would like to know your honest opinion
Thanks in advance