Chances + International Studies question?

cerberus08
Wed, 09 Jul 2008 10:35:42 +0000

I thnk your essay could be interesting, assuming they do have a ‘random’ topic. But…don’t portray yourself as ‘annoyed’ by the aforementioned HS students–I think quizzical, or puzzled would be a better portrayal of your reaction because you don’t want to be perceived as a negative person writing about negative people.

Just my two bits :)