Change me Wharton ED 2024

yshahi
Tue, 24 Sep 2019 02:46:39 +0000

Demographics: Indian male from low performing low income public school in Houston.
Hooks: I don’t have any hooks
Intended Major(s): Finance Minor: Public Policy
SAT: 1530 770M/760 EBRW
SAT II Math Level 2: 720
SAT II U.S. History: 750
UW/W GPA: UW GPA: 3.8. Weighted GPA: 4.66
Rank: 1/383 (Valedictorian)

Coursework: I’ve taken all honors and AP courses except for a few electives. I will have taken 14 AP classes by the time I graduate including 6 senior year. For my advanced placement courses, my scores were: Macroeconomics (5), Psychology (5), US History (5), English Language (5), World History (4), Statistics (4), Physics 1 (3), Seminar (3).

Awards: AP Scholar With Distinction

Extracurriculars:
-Internship at commodities trading firm
-Governance Chair of Houston ISD Student Congress, the voice of 200,000 Houston area students.

Senior Class Vice President
-Varsity Swimmer (4 years) Team Captain

Volunteered over 125 hours at Junior State of America to promote financial literacy among underprivileged youth

National Honor Society member

Essays: I think my Personal Statement is average but my supplemental essays are great according to people who have read them.
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