Check my half-done UC prompt! :D

Billionaire
Tue, 23 Nov 2010 03:26:42 +0000

First off, this may not be a good idea. Posting this on an online forum that many many people visit may lead to someone who is desperate stealing yours.

It needs lots of work for sure. Doesn’t flow very well. You aren’t using words well at all. For example, He cant “theoretically” allow you to do anything. Either he does or doesn’t. The second to last sentence is horrible as well.