Common App essay (and a question)

StuyNewyork
Mon, 12 Oct 2009 12:21:05 +0000

My common app essay could definitely use some proofreading even though my parents and english teachers have combed it incredibly thoroughly. If someone would be willing to take a look I would be most grateful. Also (for those that read it) would it make a good essay for the UCAS application to oxford? Or does that have to be more academic.

Ill PM the essay to any helpers:)

thanks in advance!

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