Common App Essay for Selective schools

ZBlue17
Mon, 24 Oct 2016 21:40:16 +0000

I’m applying to these schools for RD (and of course 3 instate safeties):

Stanford
Pomona
Vanderbilt
Notre Dame
Penn
Emory
Rice
Harvard

Is anyone willing to look at my completed essay and see if it’s worthy of these selective schools?