Common App essay: writing about a creative work (music)

mrscollege
Tue, 25 Aug 2009 01:10:22 +0000

My personal opinion…

If you’re reaching for those schools, your idea is a little familiar. I’m sure they see that “concept” in essays often. The basic arena is good, but you need to up your game.

I’m not saying it’s a bad idea. I guess I just need to hear more.

What’s your opening sentence? That’s really the key.

“The mosh pit is not the exactly the place most people reflect on their life…”