common app & supplemental essays

twosides
Sun, 10 Nov 2013 14:45:39 +0000

Hi,
Many people who have taken a look at my essays have told me that my essay includes TOO MUCH reflection and TOO LITTLE detail/story-telling. However, I don’t know if I should change anything because of the word count. Although the essay doesn’t contain vivid imagery, I believe that it is an accurate reflection of who I am. What should I do??
This applies to my UC essays as well.