Common application Extracurricular activities 150 words

<p>So I just finished the 150 word extracurricular activity that is required at common application.
Does anyone want to see it and give me an opinion about it (and maybe see for some errors :) )
Thank you!</p>

<p>PM it to me, I’ll get it back to you in 2 days with my comments. I already finished my common app essays for Early Action so you don’t have to worry about anything.</p>

Thanx a lot, but I just gave it to my english teacher!