Correct use of this sentence?

Pyar
Tue, 24 Oct 2006 00:33:47 +0000

I think it would be better if it read:
“Stock tickers flashing, investors scrambling, and papers flying (these?) are the the glamours of Wall Street.” I don’t know lol. Unless the rest of your essay uses things from speech like “ah” I don’t think you should put that there. Just my 2 cents :)