Could I get some feedback-Common app essay on failure---BE BRUTALLY HONEST

manspeak2u
Thu, 29 Oct 2015 21:07:01 +0000

@nd1012016 Ok. Let me get this straight. Are you going to use this baking example and then compare it to life? I am sort of confused. Obviously, the cake ball idea was a disaster, but I dont really understand how it is going to link with the rest of the essay. The essay is not finished, so I guess I cant really comment until I could see how you bring everything together. I could work really well. Feel free to PM me the rest. I also think it is sort of an issue that this happened when you were 13. That’s like 6th or 7th grade.