Could you grade my essay? :)

Reckie
Mon, 22 Oct 2012 17:07:45 +0000

Pros:

3 examples

Solid introduction

Good vocabulary

Cons

Off topic conclusion

Obvious spelling / diction errors

Undeveloped examples

It would get at least a 10, but I’m not a grader. You already know what you did wrong, so fix it next time.