Could you please grade my essay?

stefkost
Fri, 25 Apr 2014 11:00:39 +0000

So what matters is the critical thinking stuff and not the usage of elaborate examples?

Btw Im not american but I go to a semi-american school.
The SAT is not my first choice, so even if i achieve a low score, its not going to be the end of the world.

But our english teacher always tells us that we should use three or even four sophisticated examples from history or literature. However every single 12 essay i’ve read does not use elaborate examples, but is concise, uses everyday examples or states the writer’s personal experience…
It just has something special… So what’s that secret for a good essay?

Any help would be appreciated