Critique my essay? (specific topic)

Musab
Wed, 12 Nov 2008 17:03:07 +0000

I wrote an essay as part of my UNC application…the question was

We tend to spend our time doing the things we know we do well—running because we’re good runners, or painting because we’re talented artists. Tell us about a time when you tried something for which you had no talent. How did it go?

I basically wrote about how Tupac’s “Changes” inspired me to learn the piano, despite not having lessons or anyone to teach me except a manual.

I just want to give it to some people to critique, I wrote this essay last night non-stop as my counselor wants all my application stuff by this Friday…

Thanks.

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