Critique my essay

emmittisgod
Tue, 26 Oct 2004 17:29:56 +0000

I really liked it.

I thought it was entertaining and interesting. I also think it is fairly unique.

Maybe I’m just a moron, but I didn’t realize that you forgot about the rock climbing incident until I re-scanned it. I thought you were in a biking accident the first time. But that could possible just be because I’m a terrible reader :)

Good luck with your application!