Critique my essay

CC_Admin
Tue, 26 Oct 2004 19:23:55 +0000

Im hoping that theyre not going to count my essay word for word. And I read on an admission counselor’s blog that 570-580 is reasonable, but anymore can get annoying. I would love more comments on grammar errors, hackneyed words (i know I used memory, memorize, etc. more than a few times), or anything that was unclear in the essay. Thanks a lot guys. I appreciate you taking the time to read my essay.

One more thing, did my essay hold your interest? Some CCers on the admissions board thought it was kind of boring, and suggested I revise the beginning and the part about my memorizing pi.

(Anyway, now you now where piman3141 comes from…)