Critique my essay

emmittisgod
Tue, 26 Oct 2004 21:38:39 +0000

piman,
your essay kept my interest well… maybe i was just in a good mood? i wasn’t looking for errors, but i didn’t notice any obvious grammatical stuff…

i think it’s a solid essay… i would try to incorporate your interest in number theory somehow. but i’m no college essay guru I see it as you telling about you and if number theory is part of you, go ahead and put it in there! (I need to learn my smilies)