EDll essay "Why Tufts"? Please Critique.

sowmit
Sun, 14 Dec 2008 11:00:42 +0000

Hi! I am applying to Tufts and I had to write this supplement essay. I haven’t run it by anyone yet, please “INDICATE” problems u find with this essay. Also I have been in the U.S. for 2 years, so if there is any grammatical mistakes please let me know. Does it need to be any longer? All kinds of helps are appreciated… :)

At the end of my sophomore year, when I started looking at colleges, I considered Tufts as one of my top-priority schools although I knew it would be very competitive to get into that college. That summer I went to visit Tufts with my cousin Uzzal. I was amazed to see the university and its campus. I was surprised to see how a medium size university like Tufts can have its own unique beauty. I talked to couple of my cousin’s friends. Tufts School of Medicine seemed like a perfect fit for someone looking to pursue a carrier in Health care. Tufts’ study abroad program looked very appealing to someone like me who is very eager to explore more of the world. Then he took me to the library, student center and I found those very impressive. On top of that what appealed to me Tufts has an excellent academic record and that it has all of the resources of a major research university, two things that have been toward the very top of my priority list, when searching for schools. When I was leaving the campus; I looked back and thought myself that it would be the greatest gift ever to get into a school like Tufts University.