EPGY High- Read My Essay!

Katharos
Sat, 27 May 2006 13:45:17 +0000

Very nice essay - especially for someone so young!

I have one suggestion, though. You say, “It is not the precision of mathematics which I am appealed to.” You are ending with a preposition, which is grammatically incorrect. Instead, you might want to change it to something like, “It is not the precision of mathematics which appeals to me.” That eliminates the problem.

Again, your essay is great!