Essay advice: too edgy?

FlowerCrown
Fri, 17 Aug 2018 03:35:25 +0000

I second the “realism” idea if you’re wanting to go with it - maybe find some fancier words to describe what you’re wanting to convey.
Ultimately, however, your essay should make you sound intelligent, insightful, and overall a pleasant person. I would recommend not primarily characterizing yourself by words with negative connotations ; and though revealing some flaws in your character is a clever and humanizing move, you really don’t want to make yourself sound like a bad person overall.

I, personally, think that this is an interesting idea and can be effective if written skillfully and constructed carefully. The admissions team may find it endearing and witty. On the other hand, it could also end up making you sound negative and distrustful of others - and kind of smug about it, too.
I advise you be very careful if you decide to go with the idea.