Essay advice: too edgy?

bjkmom
Fri, 17 Aug 2018 10:33:39 +0000

If you have to ask whether it’s “too edgy” then the odds are that it is.

To reiterate what others have said, the point behind this essay is to get the reader to want to meet you, to offer you a spot on his campus because you’ll be a positive addition.

I don’t think this essay will serve that purpose.