Essay for NYU... please help me

bettina
Sat, 16 Oct 2004 14:40:48 +0000

Why oh why don’t essay writers put spaces in? It’s too hard to read so I just skimmed. Seems like you took one tiny incident and blew it out of proportion. It’s very overboard to call this an ‘attack’. I think the theme would work, but maybe with other examples.