Essay for NYU... please help me

sunnydaysee
Fri, 15 Oct 2004 01:31:11 +0000

The essay doesn’t have a lot about you in it. Perhaps shortening the story to around 150 words would help. After you mention “there must be a way” start the next paragraph with something like “all too often I try to deal with the situation at hand. I’ve never been one to talk to a stranger. And I’d rather just keep my mouth shut and my annoyance inside” And then talk about how you’ve changed and how you ask for favors. Aything else you could tell them about yourself The last sentence could be "My knees still hurt and I guess I have no other other choice but to say, “Sir, would you mind pushing your seat up a little?”