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contessa
Sun, 31 Oct 2004 14:23:51 +0000

antisthenes, oh man, i’m pretty confident you’ll get in
2 minor points regarding your essay:
the use of manifest destiny, which doesn’t necessarily mean the promised land, and does imply american imperialism although the term can be stretched
“It has also, loath though I may be to admit it, given me many opportunities I would not otherwise have had.” = the one line that i think crosses the line between realism and pessimism - you want to give the impression that u will WILLINGLY give credit where it’s due

but yes, phenomenal chances, you’re a good writer, and the lit and verbal score affirms that :-)