Essay on Bad Grades

KaeNic01
Wed, 27 Feb 2013 19:24:02 +0000

First of all, is this an “additional information” essay, or are you intending to use it as a required or supplemental essay? You shouldn’t use it as one of the main essays, but I think that it’s important enough to share on the additional info spot.
As far as critiquing the statement, it is really well written. I think it would be good if you added more on what you have done since that time- how did you deal with your past? What have you done to ensure your success as a physician? I know that you can be on a word crunch, though, so if you have no more space, I believe you could leave it as is. :)