Essay on coaches abusing me

shawnspencer
Sun, 12 Oct 2014 03:55:45 +0000

The fact is, do you think this one incident represents who YOU are? Does it show noteworthy or remarkable qualities of who you are as a person? If not, I would do as others have recommended and choose a different story about yourself. If you are worried about the impact on your academics and how that would show on your transcript, I would do as @intparent‌ suggested and have a discussion with your guidance counselor, in which they can mention this in their letter of recommendation.

Your initial question “If I were to incorporate in my paper, how do I make it sound like I am not bashing about my coaches” indicates that it would be difficult to write about it in a way that is not overly negative. I know this seems like possibly the biggest thing going on in your life at the moment, but imagine you are going for an interview, trying to join a social circle, or meeting a significant other in your life for the first time. You only have a limited amount of time to do it. Is this the first story you want to tell them? College admissions is like the same thing. If you are really adamant about it, we can’t stop you. But please ask other people around you to read it (english teacher, guidance counselor, parent etc), pretend like they don’t know you and ask them their impressions of you from reading it.