Feedback please? UC Prompt #1

littlelucky
Sun, 23 Nov 2014 01:41:54 +0000

This is a unique personal statement that will help you stand out. I like the part where you describe the chain of events that led you to becoming interested in the medical field-- one thing that could make it stronger would be to perhaps put something about how health and the human body does not discriminate between rich and poor, and that no matter how many material possessions you have, everybody suffers physical ailments.