Feeling really "Eh" about my personal statement

Duchessa
Thu, 29 Nov 2012 17:39:47 +0000

Like previously mentioned by others, I too love your introduction (maybe because I grew up with Spongebob?).
The only thing I could say is that the mention of commercials and reality TV seems a little out of place, considering you are talking about marine life.
Other than that very minute thing, you seem to be completely on track. You are setting yourself up for a very nice essay.
Best of luck! :)