First time posting please CHANCE ME!!

riaudo
Sat, 06 Aug 2011 15:37:50 +0000

It seems derisory to include your story about almost drowning, giving a 4th grade presentation, almost being struck by a car twice, and hurting your hand with a pencil as “hooks”. I understand essays, but not this.

Think about what an admissions officer would say after reading “I almost drowned when I was 14” and “I gave a 4th grade presentation on stars” if they weren’t in essays.