Fixed essay as per CC suggestions. Readers?

azhong
Mon, 01 Aug 2011 17:03:16 +0000

This is now my second draft of the Common App essay. As per CC readers’ suggestions, things have been added/removed, so now its onto the “still a draft, but better” stage. So, are there any readers? (I will be PMing. If you want to see the first draft, just say so. If you read my essay before, excellent.) Much thanks.