For those who scored high on their essays

GuitarRckr
Thu, 03 Jul 2008 23:16:41 +0000

I got a 10/11 on my essays, and an 800 on the writing section once. On the first essay, I used a personal experience (I only used one and then compared it to my sister, which is I think why I only got a 10; I did’n’t have varied examples.) Second time around, I used an example from scientific history, and then made a general observation of how the world works.

Both times I did four paragraphs and usually wrote a two-part thesis (pro’s/con’s of prompt, or agree/disagree with the prompt) and wrote four-paragraph essays (intro, paragraph for one side, paragraph for another side, and a conclusion to compare the two examples/views). I did try to use advanced vocabulary, but I only used it where it really fit (i.e. I didn’t force advanced words into the essay that didn’t flow).

I wouldn’t suggest using ONLY personal, but if you want to include one, go ahead. Also, if you can make up cultural/personal references well, do that; I know people that have made up cultural sayings or things their dying grandma said and wrote great essays. I wouldn’t make up historical/literary ones though.

The main idea you should keep in mind is having a well-structured essay with varied examples, at least I think. From then on, it’s just showing your own personal style.