Fresh Pair of Eyes

weaselxddd
Thu, 14 Sep 2017 03:31:07 +0000

Hi guys! Some cc users have kindly criticized my essay, and gave me valuable advice. They also gave me how to go on from my initial to semi-done draft. Right now, I have a final draft, and I’d like a few new people to read it and give me perspective. Any criticism is welcomed! Does anyone have time to read?