Grade my essay! overrated vs underrated

anhtimmy
Sat, 24 May 2008 18:19:45 +0000

i give it a 7/8.

why? because you dont give concrete examples.
the essay seems a little redundant.

my teachers have taught us never to use “you” in the conclusion, it’s like attacking the reader.
but by no means take offense to it, its only my opinion