Grade my essay! overrated vs underrated

asdfjkl1
Tue, 27 May 2008 17:58:18 +0000

I’ll expand on my thinking. There’s nothing wrong with the tone. If anything, I find it excessively formal for me… I did an essay with a more informal tone than this that got an 11. Though I do like hypothetical examples, the readers do not have much time to read your essay. You’re better off doing a concrete example.

Exploring both sides is fantastic and will definitely help you. Just before you start writing, scribble down an example that goes with the idea of each paragraph. That way, you’re 100% go when you start writing. :)