Grade my essay pls

Fury29
Tue, 25 Aug 2020 14:29:34 +0000

I’ve seen some high-scoring SAT essays that leave out some of the discussions of the writer. Like in this one- https://www.khanacademy.org/test-prep/sat/new-sat-tips-planning/about-the-sat-essay/a/sat-essay-high-scoring-student-example. Here the student leaves out quite a few things the writer talks about, like the adverse effects of light pollution on our health. So I tried to write about the parts of the article that I thought would be easier for me to write about. Do you think I left out the more relevant parts of Schiffman’s article?