Grade my Essay? :)

jenniferlien
Fri, 09 Aug 2013 10:47:50 +0000

jkjeremy thanks. I did take your advice on relating examples to thesis more. I’m afraid if not using these words, my essay would be filled up with redundant words so I tried to use synonyms while writing my essay. Could you give me some advice on coming up with alternative words that don’t sound awkward?