Grade my essay?

guitartrombone
Sun, 20 Jul 2014 21:26:15 +0000

ckoepp127, the best part about your comment is that it’s almost funny!!

potentially legitimate notes/advice:
-Awesome essay… like easily 10+
-I’ve gotten tens with roughly two thirds as many words.
-Careful not to be too condescending to the opposing view. I feel like the more respect you show for the opposing view, the better you show your respect for the complexity of the issue. Still, you should totally refute the view, especially if it’s toward the end of the essay. I prefer to address the opposing view earlier in the essay. I feel like this allows my essay to have more impact. If you get through everything and then say… but maybe I’m wrong but I think I’m right… you kind of lose some of the impact of your argument.