Grade my essays?

ACTsecrets
Wed, 25 Jan 2012 20:25:48 +0000

Good essay. I would give it a 5/6.

This is a strong 5 paragraph essay. The few things keeping it from a 6 essay in the repetitive nature of the essay, e.g. “Another example…” “A last example…”. Your language is a tad simple, so you could spice up your essay with use of more figurative language or other such literary devices.

You do a good job of emphasizing your points and tying your each example back to your main point, so don’t lose that.