Grade my ( Rather sucky ) essay

brand_182
Sat, 15 Jul 2006 18:19:51 +0000

First impressions arent only limited to small situations like the one mentioned above, in fact, the first impression of King Andrew G. Phlips Was one of the main factors that caused him to lose the war, when he asked for a “Calm, Self controled man” to lead his armyies into a battle (that would require great self-control) people told him about a certain man - Johnson J.- and about how calm he is, Andrew was quite impressed when he first heard about the man.

I couldn’t find a period or anything…that is definitely a run-on sentence…too many thoughts without structure.