Grade my ( Rather sucky ) essay

CC_Admin
Sat, 15 Jul 2006 18:37:10 +0000

And the conclusion could use polishing. Try to fling out a sentence that will “stick” to the memory of the reader. Maybe something like: “Life only gives us a few opportunities to judge each winking chance, so we must judge well and not let good choices slip past our eyes, for in the end, a erroneous choice built on the foundations of prejudice will come back and wound us with scars of remorse.”

Hope this helps. :)