Grade my ( Rather sucky ) essay

CC_Admin
Sat, 15 Jul 2006 18:45:10 +0000

Oh, well I disagree with that guy because I got a 10 on the essay (practice) and I totally BSed my personal anecdote. Furthermore, other people on this forum have gotten 12’s that way.

I don’t mean to offend you, but I’d probably give it an 8 because of the grammatical errors, the slight lack of analysis, and the fact that you only have one example. If you could just avoid the grammatical errors, it would help a lot. I see potential, so it’s not the apocalypse here.