Grade my ( Rather sucky ) essay

CC_Admin
Sat, 15 Jul 2006 18:32:50 +0000

Oh yeah, and I would suggest that you actually somewhat analyze the story of the King, not just tell it in your words. Like after you stated the King’s mistake, you should clearly state something like: “Due to his prejudice of what the man seemed to be, he lost not only a great potential general but also an entire bloody war.” Or something like that.