Grade My SAT Essay (1-6)

purplepotato
Sun, 18 Apr 2010 12:19:34 +0000

What makes my argument shallow…?



It takes the fact that technological advancement comes with some disadvantages and says that because there are some negatives, it must make life worse, even though as a result of both examples you used the benefits to the average life far outweigh the negative consequences.

Then again, it seems College Board assumes the best writers write shallow, formulaic essays filled with trite examples, so you’re in good shape.