Grade My SAT Essay (1-6)

Sixteh
Sun, 18 Apr 2010 18:24:11 +0000

Yamster: That’s precisely why I hate the SAT essay system, haha. Admittedly, I’m probably “grading” more harshly than the SAT graders actually would, but you never know. From what I gather, the SAT graders care more about length and such than providing a legitimate argument.

However, I’m referring to the fact that both your examples refer to current technologies that have both benefits and drawbacks; that’s one take on your thesis. The example essay takes perspectives from both the past and the present.